funny i remember when i first play duck hunt i would get so annoyd at dog laughing at me -__-
Reviews for "Kirby vs Duck Hunt"
Didn't see that one coming! XD And you think nobody can really compete with Kirby...
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I'm sorry, you're still learning the basics? This was more fluid than a lot of the stuff I see in the portal. Very fluid. The concept was nice and finny, and I like the creative way Kirby lost. The problem here was that the poop wasn't in the shot before Kirby swallowing it. It was in the first, so that's cool, but you should have shown it in that one, because it seemed like it came out of nowhere this way. The way it unraveled was also really cool-looking. Pretty nice ending with them laughing.
Keep it up, you're doing great! Sorry you didn't get into the collab, I'm sure you'll be good enough by whatever one is next.
Rennis5 responds:
Thank you :D
I had way too much fun animating that poo unravel, I was actually laughing while animating.
I was holding back on showing the poo because I thought it would be funnier if it was a bit more unexpected but you might be right, i should have shown it off more, the laughing animation for the duck was probably the hardest to get right.
Funny
lmao, very funny. imo it would have been funnier if the dog started shitting while being pulled and the shit went straight from his ass into kirby's mouth.
real feedback:
the art style and animation style should be consistent within a single work unless you're emphasizing something. the shit kirby is shaded differently and looks different than the rest of the animation but that could be done for comedic effect, like in spongebob. though i think you should have made it consistent or taken it further (ie made shit kirby even more detailed)
you go for the "shaky lines" style but when you zoom into the dog's face and during other points, the lines dont shake anymore. that doesnt sit well.
great early attempt.