Pros:
Hmm, the animation is fine, music is good. Composition, framerate, the timing was ok.
Cons:
Character model quality could be better.
Boobs don't bounce, ass doesn't jiggle. In other words, physics don't exist, except for her hair. Odd.
I can't make out what she says in the background.
You could add a liquid texture to her dildo or her vag, she seems dry as a desert atm.
Glad you enjoyed the animation!
Character model will get updates to the figure and clothing later. Among making other improvements to the model I lost her sculpted details for her figure. They'll return in the future. I'm also using Marvelous designer now for clothing so that will have some improvements too :D
There's definitely ass and boob jiggle, her movements (and sometimes the camera angle) just don't lend them selves for it to be more intense movement cause I mostly didn't include many sudden stops in the animation it's mostly smooth and rythmic. I tested this a lot and unless i give them unreasonable general settings I could not get them to move much. But i'll work on them more in the future to make sure.
Liquid texture is in the works, but i have to make a custom shader for that in Unity. I wanted it to be dynamic per "Stroke" and didn't have time to create that. I'll add it in a future update to the game build.
Music could be turned down a little, but doesn't have to be by much. I like the rather soft voice, though I couldn't quite understand what some of her lines were, but no biggie. Listening to the voice itself more than the words is good, too.
My only complaint is the sound effect. It feels very unfitting, and too loud.
Glad you enjoyed it, i'll be sure to give more attention to the audio in the future!
I think you're going to want to turn that music WAY down. You've got some very subtle, sexy dialog in there and unless you want to utterly drown it out, that music has got to drop.
For this release i spent so much time trying to get the build to work on newgrounds I couldn't make time to adjust the audio ideally.
I might have been a little unconfidant that i configured the audio properly so maybe i let the music get too loud. >_>
I'll do my best to fix it soon as i can and reupload, the real-time builds will have audio settings in the future as well.
Thanks for your feedback!