That was cool
The detail and everything was not well depicted but I know where you where going with that idea and it was really really cool. It had its own flow to it that just ran together, but as a suggestion in the begining with the ninjas fighten and stuff make the lead ninja stand out like make it so that it can be noticed like make it a diffrent color or something. But this is really great just try and perfect this style and it would really be cool