Very nicely done
I thought this piece was well done. You usually don't find movies that make you feel sad in the portal. The people who hate this movie just don't get it.
Your movies are so fluid. The minimal use of words and objects gave the movie its proper effect.
Your Keegan movies were great, but this one shows that you can easily make a whole range of effective movies in your style. I hope you make more in the future.
(By the way, that was a good choice of music.)