I feel like it focused too much on the panties at times, she just can't help but mention their silk panties whenever she gets the chance.
Reviews for "Dakota. Act1. Subway"
The voice acting is nice, I quite like the accent. It's a decent visual novel, could leave more space for the art and leave all the "please like and subscribe" to the end.
I enjoyed it... vocal work is decent, but nowhere near 'professional' quality but what can you expect from a free game? Maybe it's the dialogue she was given to narrate?
Artwork is the best part of this, but it's quite limited. Decent submission and it will be interesting to see where this goes.
The dialogue/narration is.. pretty bad, The main character is very annoying.
A visual novel done well! :D The art style's solid too. So much detail with the shading; lines it might as well be a professional comic. Marvel-style. The interaction's easy to go with and the speed easy to customize, plenty of functionality along with the visuals, just the social media buttons on the left that bug me a bit as those are LARGE. As for the story/visuals/episode overall: this was awesome. Quality work.
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