i reall like how thicc Android 18 is, make a part 2
Reviews for "Android 18 Meets Krillin - Hentai Visual Novel - Ep 1"
pinkpawg responds:
That's the idea of PinkPawg, if everything goes beyond my expectation I may could continue with that
Oh yeah. You're gonna need to put a little more work into this game.
I wouldn't mind the controls if you didn't die so easily or if you didn't need to wait 5 minutes to go through the dialogue. You should probably think about getting someone to revise your writing because it isn't the best. I'm not even sure if you can do anything once you get to the platformer part either because you get stuck and have no-where to go. So I assume you need to just survive. But yeah, you really need to work on the basic parts of the game. The arts fine just the mechanics need more work. Good Luck.
Edit:
Ok ok ok . . . So you're not supposed to walk to the end of the whole stage and jump. It has to be right before you hit the end of the map. So yeah the gameplay needs work and the text can do for some 'click to make the whole text appear' so you can just skip the tedious dialogue after already running through it. You should work on your writing, for sure. Like seriously, it's bad.
Also if you're working on making this a regular thing it may be helpful to make this downloadable through mega.nz or something to help move things along. Also provides a way to post and share nsfw content on Patreon if you want to make it free to play (or pay to play, of course) no matter where your content is discovered. That's all from me.
pinkpawg responds:
Thanks for your feedback glad you didn't had any technical issue with the platform game, the skipping text animation is a feature I'm adding,this is my first time I do some vanillia script due a patreon choice but I'm more used to do hentai like these https://pinkpawg.com/ppfapper.html.
The updates are applied in my host https://pinkpawg.com/android18 so there is no need to download updates the future is streaming you know.
Pretty good! Also i like the full screen!!
The drawings are mediocre at best.
pinkpawg responds:
This job served as a test for this game engine made from sratch, the drawing quality is not something I feel unable to achieve the challenge was in programming all this interactivity.