I liked the end part about how badly you shot, with the Kevlar vests and things. The story was pretty interesting in this one. I really liked the "near-sighted storm trooper" joke. So good. "You're gonna f**kin' kill somebody, you maniac!" was also funny to me, it works so well with your delivery. Like always, I find your jokes are very hit or miss, so the last part was a lot of hits but the first part had some misses. I did like the C button thing and the antique gun.
Overall, entertaining as usual, especially towards the end.
Reviews for "Rifle League"
Looks more like you're half the size of the rifle than the other way around. :) Entertaining at always, and I'm kinda jelly! Wish there could've been at least some part of the family who'd condone that sort of thing back when I was little... but hey, it's never too late to get started with guns! Good stuff.
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You've done better