Decent novel, has potential. Only problem with the game is the spelling errors. Frequent misspelling kills Visual Novels for me. Either take more care with your game or get a copy editor. Normally the eyes of an observer finds typos better then the one who writes the script.
Reviews for "Into the Forest Ch.1"
Art work good, short though. Might be a little unsettling with the exploitation of an unconscious, sleeping girl though
Great job. Don't know why you got negative reviews. Your time and effort definitely shows in your work! This is fantastic can't wait to get the next chapter!
it a great game
Story is awesome!