Overall -> 8 and a half. =D
The notes are very nice that you've chosen, sounds like an anthem trance mixed with DnB. The intro was pretty good too, it was smooth and easy to get into.
But then . . .
The cymbal you introduced is really poorly mixed, if i may say so without any offence. Try and compress it or even reverb, ever tried adding that little bit of reverb to kicks and percussion? It can change how a song is treated in someone's mind. It's also a little repetitive, but all techno tracks are, and if they are not, THEY SHOULD BE!
Overall, a good track, needs to be mixed/mastered a bit better, but quality happy melodies.
Cheers.