a bit rigid, but there's room for growth.
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Decent loop, but this need to be changed into A rating for the obvious sexual content.
not bad, good artwork, but its very short, hope to see you improve and wish you luck
alittle rough around the edges, but it shows promise.
specifically i would build into your rigs the ability to alter the eyes Glare placement.
and make sure the glare is never obscured by the eyelid. (because a glare is caused by light, the eyelids should never hide a glare if one occurs at all)
its believed that the reason Glares in the eye make a charecter look alive is because when someones dead there eyes dry out and don't form a glare.
so adding in the glare should help make your charecters not look so dead eyed.
NPR rendering brings in a whole host of challenges unique to it. many think its easier then photo realistic rendering but in many ways its way harder.
keep working at it though! :)
if you've not seen it, the devs of "guilty gear" did a GDC talk on how they achieved an anime look in 3d. which i found very insightful. basic jist i took away "custom normals" are probably the most important thing to achieving that 2d look.
Half a star for effort but other than that this was complete garbage- A short loop does not a toon make.