*you're :L
Apart from that typo the lyrics really aren't bad! They feel suitably cryptic for the genre, but still simple; easy to understand. Sometimes you don't need more than the one word. The vocals more than amplify the feelings; the instrumental backing fits in so well.
Around the 3:40 solo you hear the drums a lot, and I start wondering if maybe you could spiff them up a bit somehow, maybe have certain hits just a liiittle off beat as to make them feel less mechanical - apparently certain artists do. Though I suppose the pros don't miss a millisecond anyway. When you have hi-hats and all mixed in, an the percussion has a more complex arrangement, you never seem to get that mechanical impression either.
Love the background strings/synth (?) that coms in towards the end, the composition's great, the atmosphere's great, the mix overall could maybe be a little richer; less loud/more vibrant? I'm no expert but whenever I see that waveform wall I start wondering about frequency loss; what kind of nuances/reverb you may be missing out on.
Dope work!
-cd-