i am downloading it now but i already love this game great detail and cant hardly find any fault please keep up the good work i cant wait to see the finished product. the only thing that stands out for me is on the browser version before i clicked her i had no idea Linda was with someone so maybe if it isn't in the download version let that be known to the player before hand some people may choose not to go that route for moral reasons or something. still liked the story with her but my favorite was Sara.
P.S. I'm editing this to let you know i downloaded and played through it and i have to say i love the direction you are going with it my favorite is still Sara but Caroline is a damn close second at this point in the story. i don't have money to become a patron but i would love to see a finished game keep up the great work.