The animation is good, but it seemed to get a bit choppy at some points. The plot isn't that original and the voice acting could use work. Why doesn't Rota have the same accent as everyone else? The narrator sounds like he slurs his lines a bit. If you need help, just ask in the Newgrounds forums. I could see this being interesting as a full series, just, like I said, ask for help with the voice acting if you can.
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PiratePudding responds:
Thank you for the comment!
This film was made under a short deadline at the Animation Workshop, and I had to use the people at my disposal at the studio, so most of them weren't trained in voice acting.
This trailer is only supposed to be a note of intent, but I will do my best to have more polish for the next part.
As for the accents, most of the voices are from Danish people, except for the messenger and the Grandpa, who is not supposed to be Norse, but Slav. So he has a different accent from his granddaughter on purpose. ;)
very nice work
PiratePudding responds:
Thank you very much. :)