Boob Punch. Well done, there is a ton of action!
Reviews for "Vending Machine Melee"
SuperLME responds:
I know! There's always a groin shot gag in movies and television. Why is it there's never a female version? You hardly ever see it the other way around.
-Lax
Nice man.... really nice
SuperLME responds:
Thank you!
I overall enjoyed it :o I just had a few comments!
Why did the fight start? The ending implied that she was gonna take a candy bar that the main character wanted but in the beginning the woman was just ahead in line? Didn't make sense to me.
I loved most of the fighting and that first punch had a LOT of weight behind it! Love it! However I felt that the the use if the clenched fist was a little over used.
Finally as others have said just work on the art style and sound. You can simplify for speedy action scenes but sometime it seems a little too simple.
but good job none the less!! Really enjoyed it!
SuperLME responds:
Thank you, xDeadBoii.
When planning out this animation, I had the fight scene as the main course. I needed a way for the fight to be set up and that's why the girl stepped in front of her. I wanted a pseudo realistic / comic art style with some shading into it. This is the first animation I've done using after effects.
-Lax
The scenario is simple and to the point. The lackluster voice acting could use work (yes, even grunts need paying attention to). The animation quality is quite inconsistent, alternating from choppy to fluid. The art style is consistent, so that’s a plus. I recommend you make more animations in order to improve your fluidity.
Not bad though. Entertaining.
SuperLME responds:
Thanks. This is the first time I've worked at 24 fps. I usually work with 12-15 fps. In the future, I'll work to keep things more fluid. I want to tell a story someday, but I don't have any scripts. Thank you for the constructive criticism.
-Lax
Lots of great action! Some of the anatomy and camera movements were a bit wonky and I noticed that some of the snacks in the vending machine at the beginning weren't colored in and you could see the background through them because of it. Besides that this was very good! Keep it up!
SuperLME responds:
Thank you. The action was indeed the main course for this animation. I lost detail for the vending machine assets. In the future, I'll write a story for the orange haired one.
-Lax