this is a really well done game. the cons are i had some problems with the saving , theirs some grammar mistakes that have already been pointed out so i well not waste time listing them, and the ending is kind of sudden but the pro ways out number the cons the story is great the red a blue option make for good choices but you don't make players just chose them the art is done well and the voice work is good i would gladly play and pay for more of this game so keep up the good work and good the others working on this my praise for there parts.