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This sounded like alot of standard fl sounds and shit...but they were arranged well enough though. Since you were using the trial fl, no fault. I think you should move away from that and find something better for your vocals. That is where I really heard the talent.
I gave it a 5 to try to survive. The FL pro's will rate it down hard because of the standard sounds. Hope they listen to the arrangement instead.
Thanks for your vote, Bad-Man-Incorporated! You voted 5 for Industrial lane, raising its score from 4.20 to 4.33