I like the story but as far as the game mechanic....Its so damn boring i feel like im playing click simulator. I know how visual novel are but jeez can i work in the resturant...Maybe scene of game where you impress pandora by your skill working at the counter...Or maybe being able to manage the resturant. You know something that says hey i am the manager i manage the resturant not a clicking simulator. but i do understand that its your first VN and to that I hope you will include mini game or something to take our mind off of mindless boring clicking.