A for effort my friend, It's better than what I could do, but it does seem to need work, but practice makes perfect, I think you will improve on this 10 fold!
A for effort my friend, It's better than what I could do, but it does seem to need work, but practice makes perfect, I think you will improve on this 10 fold!
kinda blocky but not horrible and needs better timing on voicing.
pretty good but still really short