:/
Im not one to give bad reviews, and im not gonna start here. I just wanna let you know that you lack humor in that.
So the bird gets hit, that almost got a chuckle out of me, but hardly made the cut.
You need a more diverse style, however, the animation was decent.
You could have potential, but i think you need to spend a little more time with it, if in fact you decide to try the whole hunor thing again.
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