I really enjoyed this game. The artwork in the sex scenes are excellent, but i had difficulties getting a couple of them. The only issues that i have with are with a couple of minor grammar errors. I also think that you should give everyone access to the walk-through, but that's just in my opinion.
I'll be looking forward to the next update.
The story is a bit unrealistic, although the writing is well enough. I'm having trouble getting to scenes 11-13 and 15. I noticed that they are not all in chronological order. Which could help locating scenes.
I'm going to keep watching your progress and might support you in the future, but right now I do not think a monthly payment is worth the content of this game. Per major update, maybe.
There are some minor mistakes. "Don't say nothing" is tautological. You either don't say anything or say nothing. A common mistake, but you should fix it. Other things like "drowned my nostrils" are quite odd to say. Overwhelmed should work. There are some similar mistakes, but now I'm just looking for them.
Thanks for your feedback! Yeah, there's still plenty of polishing to do in the writing too. I'll consider this for the next update!
This is one of the better indie sim games out there because it has an original story and idea but as others have said before me, there is room for improvement. I congratulate you on making such a good first game. I do have a couple of questions though; Will you make a walkthrough for this game? Are you going to update this game in the future? Do you have plans on making the game downloadable at some point?
Thanks for your kind review!
My patreon supporters have both access to the downloadable version of the game and the walkthrough, so maybe you'd be interested in that!
I will surely update the game at some point to polish stuff and put more content in it, but right now I feel more like doing a new game from scratch. But who knows! Depends on what people want first. :)
good game
This game is quite nice but it could need a walkthrough. cant find scenes 7, 8 and 11-18. Feelsbad.