It was kinda funny
You made a good effort but you still need work
It was kinda funny
You made a good effort but you still need work
ok heres your problem
Ok I see some real effort here, but your sound and animation do not match up. I watched it twice and your action lags behind the sounds.
If you can fix that it would make this alot better. Also you could have made this a little longer. YOu could have show what the demands were or had him read them. The sound not mat ching up is the reason your getting a lower rating on the movie.
Dude that'a gust Gay
This was horribly GHay (not a typo it's gay with a capital "GH") I'm sorry but it made no sense at all.