To leave a good word..
I just happened to come across this tune while wandering around the classical section. I must congratulate you on your first attempt at a classical. Quite well, but a techno style close to the end doesn't match at all in the classical genre. That added some diversity, yes, but lost point in originality. Yet, with that aside, I can easily see your first attempt in here, and it was a good attempt indeed. There is much to learn if you are planning to stick some more classical tracks in your arsenal. But, you do what your soul thrives towards. If anything, I've learned that to continue after failure is to continue on the road for success.
-ßosa