Nice story. It's a bit too easy as a game, maybe needed more vague conditions to make potion choices harder (or maybe adding side effects or something) but I give 5 stars anyway
Reviews for "The Alchemist"
It-It was beautiful!
Beautiful story. I did find the dialogue at the very start feel a little bit off but the rest was good. You might want to change the infinitely moving mouths, I found those very jarring while reading. Instead maybe have them move for a little while before stopping. I loved the ending (haven't tried the other one yet) very touching.
4 Stars I took one off because the game still lacked some polish here and there. I was also hoping for a bit more.