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Reviews for "Verity"

This beginning, not bad :3
I don't really like this flute, probably just me.
The drums seem *kind of* loud.
This part seemed a bit... bland. The one with just the piano and snaps. Could use another melody. Also, I'm not sure if this is really "House". It's definitely tropical, but I don't think it falls under house.
Don't take my word for it, it just doesn't sound like a house song to me :3
Overall, kind of repetitive but all EDM songs are like that. It was pretty generic, not enough for me to not like it but yah. I kind of liked it. I just didn't like some of the instruments you used. May have just been me. But I rate a 3.5/5, For good track overall but just needed some minor fixes with mixing and EQing.

Ur d00d,
~Z

First of all, the chord progression is really cliche. The mixing is okay, but there were a few sections where the drums or a lead was too loud and stood out a lot. I also feel like you didn't take risks with this one and it sounds like a very generic tropical house. I really didn't hear anything unique in it. I would assume someone just starting in house made this because it sounds like a tutorial was followed note by note, sound by sound. It also sounds like presets were used, because I've heard the same sounds before. Now, I'm not taking anything off because of it, because it's not something that's wrong, but you should try and transform them a bit, whether it's tweaking the sound or layering it with another sound or two. Otherwise it just adds to the generic feel of the song. From 2:16 onward I really didn't know what to focus on. It was just confusing and there were too many things to follow. Try and fill it up with smaller things instead of larger ones.

Mostly you just need to work on mixing and originality a bit more. Those were the two things that really bothered me in this one. Besides that, the track is okay. It just had a cheap feel to it, if you understand what I mean by that.

6/10