Very well done animation , I really liked it , and also would like to see more like this , even coming from me a guy that likes blood and guns , all that stuff. Good job !
Very well done animation , I really liked it , and also would like to see more like this , even coming from me a guy that likes blood and guns , all that stuff. Good job !
Nice
I like the addition of the "PENCIL" and eraser really nice idea there, as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell, I love the flow of animation here and love all that you do with color and how fluid the animation goes from a to be, and you bring some nice little stories here and make them come alive with the very smooth animating skills so very nice work here, It's hard to offer a lot of critisism on this, And once again we have another decent flash, theres not alot I can say to improve on this but there are some things that could be cleaned up as menioned and below, but for the most of this its pretty good and I liked everything I saw here, Andlook forward to seeing more of this, so keep up the good work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
as my tip for this entry I might suggest some flashy effects on impact moments lighting and dark effects aswell
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You're on the right track with this animation. The pacing definitely feels slow all the way through. Other than that, I feel this deserves a strong 3 stars from me. Keep up the great work!