Great installment of Pussymon !!!
Good: The art style looks like you have honed it or sharpened it massively, I also see you added certain Details, that were not there in the dialog art before. Also Is this the first time you put in randomized rewards as far as hearts and 1 ups I didn't notice it till this installment ? I really liked that you decided to return to the Bitchtaker, as means of travel rather then walking, It was well needed, because the walking was getting dull. there was just too much of it at once ya know. :)
Also loved the Grammar much better! Some others in the comments recommended You also invest in art classes as a alternative to hiring a artist, which is a good idea if you have the time. :)
Bad: Everything is coming along so well, The Story is great and how it has evolved is fantastic ! But still no music It saddens Me , I don't know why there is still no music? Is it because You can't find the music You like or You just don't have the time to add it in? Either way try( No Copy Right Sounds on youtube.com) Check em out maybe you will find something You like enough to make the time to add it in. :)
As Always Good Luck for the future of this project! Peace Out!