nice
your music is great. i loved it, should of had yourself at the piano though, unless that was you in a dead form. but the picture in the end wasnt all that scary...needed something to build up to it.. like if you really want to make something scary, throw in a heartbeat, always works, worked for Silent Hill 2 and the Ring. but it was good
Thanks for the suggestion about the heartbeat, that is so classic, I might use it in my next one. Haven't seen the Ring yet but heard it's good.
This was pretty good.
This was a pretty good cartoon. I'm looking forward to watching part 2, 3, and your new one part 4.
good for you!!! :)
Very Good
I liked this alot. Good job.
Thanks.
that made me jump!
Ahh the first Ghost Motel, great to see where it all began in this great series!
The introduction was good as soon as Joseph entered the Motel and there was a view of the skeleton face picture I knew 'wow this is going to be a good series!'. It had an eerie feel especially the music but ive noticed the voices wernt very good because they all sound expresionless and unenthusiastic, but i guess thats what you were trying to do to make that ghost feel :) But the sobbing nosie just sounds a bit bad it sounds more like someone laughing than sounding upset and you gave me a god fright there with the face!. Overall though a great start to the series, well done :)
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That sobbing sound, I had gotten off a scary sound fx cd. It was what I had at the time, I'm sure there are better sounds to use. Nice of you to have such optimistic hope of this series, even at just the 1st episode. There wasn't that much to the 1st episode, but it was the start of it all. And from here on, you can see things gradually improve, as we get more practice doing these. Thanks for the review Tiger_Chick.
OMG
wtf why did i jump at the end that face fne scared me!!!