The dollar bill that brought misfortune in the previous part, finally leads to happiness. I want to see it as all the hopes of that poor guy have now reached this other mendicant through the dollar bill, giving that moment of happiness that he couldn't have. Following this interpretation I feel in middle between sad and happy.
Sorry for my pseudo-philosophical arguments, I liked both your works, especially the first one, and I'll gladly await to see the third part. Keep on the good work!
Reviews for "THE LOLLIPOP"
afrotique responds:
cheers man! ill try and meet ya expectations with the third part <3
Expression is a good word to describe this animation. With no dialogue you definitely managed to evoke personality out of your characters and the emotion of the simple act of giving. I was moved.
Animation wise, relatively smooth, fluid, and bouncy. There were only a couple of parts, such as the overhead show showing the characters full body as he walked, slightly awkward. But it did not detract from the overall package.
All in all, good work!
afrotique responds:
appreciate it man!
Story was cute
So the story was cute here it really was the drive of this whole piece the animation was even better I thaught very fluid and worked well with the story so nice work indeed on this little story I would try and stretch this out a bit more though
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make this longer
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Aw, now this is the right way to conclude! :D Happy the previous segment wasn't the only segment! Really feeling the happiness here. Hopefully there's not more to the spectrum hmm, maybe he doesn't give him the lollipop anyway, and the poor guy gets jealous, and they start fighting and eh... well, this seems like a good conclusion, anyway, if it is. Good to see the guy survived too.
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afrotique responds:
cheers man <3 <3
Great, thank you for sharing.