It had a good story and it was easy to follow.
This is one of the longest shorts I've seen on newgrounds in a while and the story was consistent the entire time and had a good ending.
The characters had a lot of personality and it was funny at times.
The animation was pretty good but not amazing.
The character and background designs were ok and I wished they were a bit more detailed.
Considering the time and effort it took to make this I'd say this is really good.
This was enjoyable.