Wow, this...
I'm just gonna start off by saying "wow!" You made the song sound less cluttered and jarring and more clearer and better sounding to the ears. Not that I didn't like the original, believe me I did!
I do hope you get scouted soon though. I think we've had enough fakes in both the Geometry Dash community and the Newgrounds community, and having such a well sounding and awesome track on newgrounds by the real SHK will certainly end that.
Speaking of scouting, I've already scouted you, so hopefully my little submission helps out a little!
Finally, welcome to NewGrounds, SHK. You have been wanted :-D