the initial play through was a lot of fun but there wast very much variation between the different "paths" of the story. im excited to see where you take this game in the future
Reviews for "Chronicles of Terra: Makon the Overlord"
The concept is interesting thought adding some music would be better, also adding pictures so that it might look like a Visual Novel will improve the experience (although I know it is hard if you can't draw but it will make the game more enjoyable)
It's a pretty cool game. The good king ending was mildly cheesy, but it was a really cool game in general.
While it's mostly a ripoff of another CYOA called "Choice of the Dragon", it kinda by makes up for it by how little the game takes itself seriously. Make sure you are more original next time.
I agree with H0RR1BL3CPU, no subtlety