Sweet
Hey Stealth. I've been listening to this piece loop nearly 10 times now, it serves for a great ambiant, atmospheric feel as you said you wanted. Having achieved what you set out to do, I congratulate you.
Onto the piece itself now!
The reverse hats, the snares, the kicks, quite eerie. The somewhat melodic background with the piano is a factor that slightly bleeds away the eeriness, makes me think of a tree atop a hill located in a graveyard. It's also raining, in the dark so it makes for a really great image, some small child is swinging, going back and forth laughing, strangely enough there is no swing... the image is quite eerie.
The scream at the end didn't really suit the song in my opinion. Yes it makes for a great addition, but on the other side of that coin it also makes the song less listenable, as you would not be able to claim it fully ambiant for the scream proves to be distracting.
The glitched organ, was a pretty good idea, goes very well with the whole scene. Really this was a very very good song, you truly are prooving to become quite the competent artist. I look forward to your other tracks!
Here's my 5 Stealth, keep up the good work ;).