Okay, let's see. The artwork was okay, for your second game. The crayon-drawn appearance of the characters even has a certain charm to it. Coupled with the dialogue, it made me feel like I was reading out of a storybook. You've got a good tone, too - the narrator's sense of humor is kind of dry, and it made me chuckle a few times.
I love the premise "What do you do when life doesn't give you lemons?" and how you handled that idea. No lemons, just tomatoes? Make it work. Wanna backstab a potato mafia? I mean, if you really want to. Want to be an employee and settle for a salary? Eh, your choice. And your consequences.
Pretty short, I played through all the paths in about 7-8 minutes. Simple story that didn't overstay its welcome. No music, but I don't think that was a bad thing for a small storybook like this.
Hell, I'd play it again two or three times. Charming little game, and it makes me look forward to your next one. No complaints, so five stars all well-earned!
Reviews for "Lemonless"
Thanks for the great feedback! :)
Very funny and interesting game! Here are some advices for the future:
* I recommend you to make more "smooth" animations in your games in the future so we can see the actions more detailed.
*Try to improve the art design a bit, making the font look better and improving the character/stage design would be really cool.
*Adding sound effects, music or something like that would also be appreciated.
Anyways, good job with this game! I was very creative but a bit minimalistic. I hope to see more games from you in the future! ;)
Thank you for the awesome review! I'll be working on the 'extra polish' in future projects.. ;)
nice idea
funny
nice style
funny
to bad they werent no combustible lemons
you dont make lemonade when life gives you lemon!
Thank you! And you've got my interest right there... Should we call it a "Lemonotov Cocktail"?
Personally, the art style is really appealing in this setting.
The endings are short, easy and fun. So much better than boring routine work.
Actually, the soundless part makes the gameplay pretty smooth for me.
If you are going to add sound to it, please do add the option to turn it off, too. :)
Thank you for creating the game!
And thank YOU for the kind words... :D
I love the multiple endings. The art style is very good and the narrators reactions are grand. I have to admit my favorite part of the game was the narrator. I would recommend adding more sounds (I know it's too late and you'll add it in the later ones but it's still a review sorry). Also I enjoy you replying to the reviews. Good developers always take feedback : D
Thank youu! And also thank you for enjoying that I'm thanking you right now.. Mind blown... :D