I really like your animation style; it's very fluid and well done. I think the intro got to long to get to the point even though that's how GTA5 is laid out, it was a little too long for my taste. As far as subject matter, this might not have been the best choice as far as narrative is concerned since Oney doesn't really add to much with his voice. Overall though you did a really good job with the material you had. Well done!