I was drunk when I watched this and didn't find itthat funny.
Reviews for "BPTV PILOT"
Coolprinter's review is everything i wanted to say, he fucking nailed it. This is better than any of your other stuff, especially compared to StuBoy and PivBoy. I'm really glad you improved there, I was really expecting this to be another bland "2 guys who live together and go on adventures" series by you, but thankfully it wasn't. But dude this is the third time you've tried that concept. I'd really suggest either trying something else or keeping this concept but thinking really outside of the box with it, put a twist on it or something. But thankfully, unlike your other shit, this thing actually made sense! I could watch this and actually get something out of it, that's improvement right there cool! Your humor is still something I'll never appreciate, but humor is subjective and the humor in this cartoon isnt haha funny fart LOL so i'll give you some credit for atleast trying with the jokes here. Your animation has gotten better over the past couple of months aswell, which is good. I actually really liked the posing and scenery in this cartoon, especially when they're trying to not kill the boss. The colors in this cartoon are pretty nice to look at too. Coolprinter already went on about this but yeah those character designs, i dunno man. Your character designs have never been anything special, and they still arent anything special! The boss looks ok but the designs for Berry, Pepper and Tootsie are actually the most generic thing ive seen from you besides the StuBoy and PivBoy designs. Give the characters different head shapes, body shapes, heights, weights, colors, or dont even make them human. Do whatever to the characters to make them look interesting in the slightest. While you're at it, start learning anatomy or something, i know its a cartoon but having hands and other body parts looking so sloppily drawn just bugs the fuck out of me. The voice acting was actually not that bad. Besides an animator you like to consider yourself a voice actor but i think this is the only time your voice acting has actually stood out. Everyone else did good too, Ricepirate is always a great voice actor no matter what he's in. The music in this cartoon was pretty good too. Thank jesus you aren't getting Ihugeny to do your music holy fuck what were you thinking getting him for the deadpool musical cartoon you made.
Overrall, i saw improvement in this for alot of departments but there's still a couple important things to be fixed. Good luck boy
ThePivotsXXD responds:
Lhugueny paid me for those haha. They were commissions. Thanks for the review dude! This series actually isn't about 2 guys living together. It starts out that way though. I have a lot of different things I haven't tried yet, and I'm excited to get those ideas out. Thanks again dude!
Animation was nice, the humour could have been better written
Feels like the animation takes perhaps....too much inspiration from OneyNG...? You know? The humour and animation don't match exactly. Feels like the 'humour' and the animation are trying to find its middle but missed.
ThePivotsXXD responds:
HAHAHAHAHA
This whole cartoon was average at best everything about it. Nothing was great and nothing was bad it was just ok. Freezepark and cool printer pretty much got it dead on in their reviews. This cartoons is hell of a lot better than Stu & Piv but it's still nothing special and I know humour is subjective and all but the only joke I laughed at in this cartoon is the one poking fun at the character design.