This is a great game. The only issue I have with the artwork is that it was a little difficult to make out some of the images, but I have no problem with the style.
It sounds like the plot isn't yours, but I enjoyed it. It surprised me several times; it seems so mundane at first, but it sucks you in as the characters develop, and the events slowly get more and more intense until that heart-wrenching choice at the end. Well done translating it to picture, even though there are some spelling and grammar errors to correct.
I did see at least one glitch. I decided to save the kid you hit with a car, but at the end, the game told me he died in a hit-and-run, and that it was my fault for fleeing. You might want to check your you story branches and result.