This tune is wrong.
OK, so now I´m seeing your track here. I´ve just happened to hear Chronamut´s original song, which was an awesome track I´ll review soon. And this better be REALLY good if it´s even gonna be worthy for it, at least it needs to be original.
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I´m downloading it so I can compare them.
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*Downloads*
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*Listens once*
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Whoa, that was really as alike the original as even POSSIBLE! I couldn´t even imagine how this could be any different from the original- except for lenght.
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I*Chronamut´s original is done playing right after yours*I
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Yes.
I´m sorry to say, but Chronamut´s is actually much better than this. You shouldn´t have changed the pan flute to a piano.
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Pan flutes are awesome.
Piano isn´t.
Piano is boring.
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You put some good delay effects into it, though, which made the track much more enjoyable, but not really any special.
It´s played at exactly the same tempo. You really have to make it different in ANY way you can, and so should the tempo. Slower or faster, but I don´t really feel well with the original tempo.
Did you actually listen to Chronamut´s one and analyze the good and bad points of it, making it possible for YOUR version to be even better? I bet you didn´t.
Actually it sounds like you just toke a kind of MIDI from his and put it into your program, whatever you use, and changed it in a minimalistically small amount.
I could have liked this, but the fact that you changed it that little and nearly stole his track is so damn annoying that I won´t give you much more than a 2.
A low 2, too.
Originality is an important factor.