While I have no idea what happened to the plot (since it jumped from episode 1 to 24) & some of the animation looking "unfinished", the sound effects, lighting, & characters looked great. Hope you computer gets fixed so that you can make more episodes,
Reviews for "Gunmetal Black Ep 24"
Mediocre animation, terrible camera action and sound editing, and mostly bad voice actors (one of whom is a creepy deviantart diaper pedo), but at least you're aware of the issues which means (hopefully) you'll do better in the future.
Kel-chan responds:
yah this was a piece of crap from the beginning of last year before I made most of last years animations. So its basically what my skill was in 2014. I only put it out because my comp died and I lost everything I had been working on cept this ironically so I tried to piece it together
Couldn't help but think of Batman games when I heard the grapple gun :P