i'll split this into 3 parts, one for each 'segment', each with its own rating.
Segment One:
Cons: The echo-y FXs are a bit badly mixed, especially at :10 and mostly :19, where they overpower a lot of the rest of the song. Also, the arps in the background (from :20 to :31) need some delay/reverb, as they sound too dry.
Pros:
Pretty much everything else is perfect, the melody is really nice and calming, and the sounds are just right.
Score: 4.5/5
Segment Two:
Cons:
At about :53-:54 the chord sound gets kind of loud (i think that's what happened?) and overpowers the rest of the instruments just a bit. Also, the drums (starting at :56) are way too quiet (specifically the hats and snare). The arps that begin at 1:03 are a bit loud as well, and the wet level on the reverb is a bit too high, plus the mixing kind of falls apart around that point.
Pros:
I love the atmosphere you created with this one. The sounds are perfect for the melody, and vice versa. It progresses nicely as well.
Score: 3.5/5
Segment Three:
Cons:
There are some overall mixing problems at ~1:37, but they're pretty minor.
Right at 1:51, the echo from the FX kind of cuts out some of the other sound, and the snare in that part is way too quiet.
Pros:
Can't get enough of dem FX in the first bit, nice and atmospheric. The ticking sound builds up tension perfectly for the drop thingy, which transitions perfectly. The instrumentation is also really great,
Score: 4/5
Total: 4/5, really great song!
Thanks for taking the time to read this!