Aside from art, I think you're on a good path.
Interestingly written, and some good characters.
Art will come later, just keep at it.
Aside from art, I think you're on a good path.
Interestingly written, and some good characters.
Art will come later, just keep at it.
It's alright, sound needs some editing.
Yes, It needs a lot of it. I'll try harder next time.