You are a very good storyboad-artist, your feel for the right perspective in the frames is great and the screen change between the artworks, together with the well chosen soundtrack, build up a strong tension for the viewers.
However, since this is only the prelude to the "final fight" scene (I asume) I can't say anything about the story arc and the characters so far. But I've seen a lot storyboards that weren't so clear in sight & sound, you sure deserve praise for what you did so far.
I sure hope to see more of it, and since I can almost sense some self-doubt in your soul: Believe in your self, do your best but don't be to perfectionistic with every detail - would be a shame if the world would never see your complete opus.