Very unique
I found this "CHARACTER" random and unique like when he tried to stick the can in his face, that was some good idea there, I would love for you to advance on these ideas and make a whole series from this one, So for what I got out of this it was pretty positive, allthough later you will find some helpfull ideas, tips and suggestions that may help make it even better so try them aout and never be afraid to try new stuff.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would love for you to advance on these ideas and make a whole series from this one
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