nice intro. What I like about this is it's not a typical dance song where I skip to 1:10 to ditch the intro. Interesting lyrics. Keep at it more and more and you'll be able to blend them better. really awesome melody. only constructive critisism I can give is some sort of tweat to the way the vocals sit on the song but that comes with like a decade of pratice heh. it's a really good song. great job!