I like the fluent style of your Animation and I think its pretty funny, buuuut to give you some critique.... even though it was hard to find something, I think the last camerapan was a little unneeded, you could have made a whole bodyshot then it wouldn't be so shaky (maybe the wrong word here but the shot before was slowly zooming in and then there is this quick cut and a quick pan up, that feels a little rough to watch, maybe you could have made a static shot just on the upper body..^^)
Buuut after all, very solid animation style, good lipsync and nice gigglemoment, cant stop watching it :D
4.5/5 :)
looking foreward to your next piece, you good sir are getting a follower !
Reviews for "The Escape Artist"
ShadeMachine responds:
Even i was not satisfied with the camera effects... It does feel... not smooth/sudden movements..!! Thank you for the cool tips...!!! :)
good animation, however the voice acting isn't something to be desired
ShadeMachine responds:
Thank you very much..!! The audio clip is from a movie.. The Princess Bride 1987.
Like what you did with the camera man! Nice work. The characters could use a bit of work, and although this is a bit unrelated, you should take out the "experimental logo" text. The logo itself is pretty cool, you can change it whenever you'd like anyways so keeping it there seems like a note for yourself, not the viewer. Lastly, nice smoke fx at the beginning!
ShadeMachine responds:
Thank you Mabelma..!!!