I think you really improved. The body movement is a lot smoother with much more complex characteristics in the anatomy of the characters. This is the kind of stuff that makes me wish I still practiced making cartoons again. Theme was a bit depressing though.
Reviews for "Clucky's Birthday Surprise"
Brewster responds:
Thanks justin you're a sweet. Also I listen to publicly funded nonironically, thought you should know.
Clucky has to get out of the tub lol well join him in the tub) and he leaves lol and the poor kid drowns and comes up through the toilet wtf lol
Clucky's Birthday Surprise
What happens when a friend of yours forgets to get you a gift? You get a Hot Tub!
Story- As this is a comedy, the story isn't as important as the jokes and its safe to say Clucky's Birthday Surprise is in the middle. While I can see some people getting a couple chuckles, a lot of the humor is designed on how the characters work off each other and it's alright in that regard, some hit and some miss.
Animation Quality and Visual design- The Animation is pretty good. The lip sync is nice enough, and the motions are smooth. In the case of Visual Design, there is a distinct style throughout, with very bright colors and simplistic backgrounds and characters.
Voice Quality- While nothing stands out as fantastic, nothing is bad either. Nothing feels disconnected or off putting about either of the performances in the animation. The voices also fit the personalities that are portrayed in the animation.
Audio Quality- There is little to no audio except for the voices of the characters and the intro and outro so this section doesn't matter as much. The audio quality on the voices are good enough to be able to be understood and that's really all that mattered for this animation.
Final thoughts- Clucky's Birthday Surprise is a nice animation with nice voices and a fine execution. Clucky's Birthday Surprise gets a 3.5 out of 5.
Your humor reminds me of Home Movies almost
Hahaha, pretty nice. :D
The ending was a bit off-putting, but I thought everything leading up to it was pretty great.
Animation was good, as was the color palette & character design, but your linework could use a bit of smoothing.
Anyway, keep it up! good stuff! :)