Amazing
THAT is the kind of stuff i want to see on this site. Amazing.
Reviews for "Alley of the Dolls: Pt. 3"
Not bad. Could be better.
You need to flood your story with more dialogue and side characters. Bon mots, Americanisms, European (old world) sayings---you got have these people talking like they each got 3 extra orafices. Don't think just because you're writing a story with Flash animation the old rules don't apply. Some people call that "padding", but I call that an insult. You want my sincerest opinion? Don't hold anything back.
The famous comic book artist Stan Lee put together a Flash animation and turned an episode into NG. That dialogue was FAST, and you understood his story INSIDE and OUT. Tough to do without making a fool of yourself, but that's the challenge.
beautifully done
the only complaint I have is, why does everyone have rediculous names
I'm allmost became a fan
Nice work by putting voice actors in.
The style and story made me almost a fan.
Better in some ways, but not as good in others...
I thought the introduction of voices was a good move, but the sound was kind of choppy and not in sync with the animation. That was the only thing I didn't enjoy. But otherwise, this was a good installment. I thought it was a little better than the first two in some aspects, but the I think the very first episode is the best one so far. If this one had more neat little things like the vamp-o-meter or the little wind-up drill thing, it would have been better.