Our hero...
Has a frog in his throat. All the other voice actors/actresses have high quality sound trakcs, while the hero...he seems to have a bit of a speaking problem. None the less, this is a great movie! :)
Reviews for "Alley of the Dolls: Pt. 3"
i have to say this!
the last reviwer said the voice acting was to slow! unlike the stan lee comic! stand lees movies where last pased action! whereas this movie was meant to be slow and eerie! i think he got it bang on the animation was great and the music was cool! good job!
Not bad. Could be better.
You need to flood your story with more dialogue and side characters. Bon mots, Americanisms, European (old world) sayings---you got have these people talking like they each got 3 extra orafices. Don't think just because you're writing a story with Flash animation the old rules don't apply. Some people call that "padding", but I call that an insult. You want my sincerest opinion? Don't hold anything back.
The famous comic book artist Stan Lee put together a Flash animation and turned an episode into NG. That dialogue was FAST, and you understood his story INSIDE and OUT. Tough to do without making a fool of yourself, but that's the challenge.
Amazing
THAT is the kind of stuff i want to see on this site. Amazing.
What was that?
What was she eating? a heart? Anyways, good job
robfeldman responds:
Yes, it was a heart from the mrogue. Next insatllment wraps up all questions.
Thanks for the nice review!!
-Rob