you dont know how many
times i had to restraine myself from shutting it off half way through, fucking newground ppl are getting so gay, o now i have to watch a gay dbz thing that you fucking dildo ppl picked as a top 5! maybe .... not trying to be mean... maybe bin ladden had a point....
not bad...
The music was catchy, the animation was ok, and i look forward to future movies and games from you.
OK...
could've used some sound to make it like a music video. Kinda reminds me of a screen saver. Try a little harder next time. Take a look at Paper Wars for examples.
WTF!!!!!
OK WTF WAS THAT POS GOD DAMN IT SEROUSLY BLAM THIS SHIT, THIS IS WHAT IS CLOGGIN UP NEWGROUNDS, BLAM IT NOW FOR FUCK SAKE!
Sucks.
This would've been fine for your "first try practice run" in the comforts of your own home, but why waste space with this piece of shit. Advice: practice, practice, practice and make something with a goddam plot to it. And if it was "in the making far befoer Paper Wars hit newgrounds, then surely it would've been SLIGHTLY better.
no, because I am not a talented artist for one. also, I just meant I started it way back then, I haven't been working on it constantly. thirdly, Paper Wars was obviously in the works for a lot longer than this. look, its number one of all time! :)
"the only similariy is it has a pencil drawing stuff, so I just didnt want to be accused of stealing anything." <-- that was for another reviewer.
anyways, I did try pretty hard on this. it's the best I can do with all my mad skills (yes, I know. pretty sad) and, well, yeah...