awesome! This reminds me of some of the earlier Æon Flux episodes. Some of the movements were almost grotesque. I mean that in a good way.
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TaraGraphika responds:
Thank you, grotesque is good. grotesque is good.
Pretty good, considering I generally don't like sci-fi animation.
On a side note, coffee doesn't have this effect on me, but that might be because of my hyperactivity, which causes my energy levels to already be through the roof. Hence, I generally don't need coffee, unless I've pulled an all-nighter on something.
TaraGraphika responds:
Hearing that makes me happy.
Also, That is good to know. Fast Metabolism you have there.
Thank you!
Very nicely drawn and animated!
There is some inconsistency of style in various portions (esp. going toward the "cartoony" sad in the face at the end, which was derivative and deriving from the wrong source). Also, the meaning was not clear to me - I got it on a visceral level, but there was so much jumping around in imagery and idea that it was more of a smattering and less of a story.
Overall, very nice!
TaraGraphika responds:
Thank you!
I noticed my inconsistency and even if I could explained why, there should be no excuse as an animator. However, I will try to give in my inconsistency and create something out of it. As a story, it could, as many have mentioned, that It could sink in more that the meaning and its entire arc is understandable. Because, If one do not understand, then its no excuse and its a given that I failed to make it coherent. But, I will always accept clear criticism like this to help me understand in future projects. I thank you sir!
This is great but, the animation is too shaky, and the head and body scale. Some of the proportions look a bit abnormal when zoomed out, in the first scene, where the young girl walks to her mother, her head is too big. You might need to work on your proportion sizes.
TaraGraphika responds:
Not gonna lie, I'm bad at proportions. And yes, majority of the animation is a bit too shaky, and missing a lot of inbetweens. I'm planning to make things smoother for my next work. Thank you:D
So to save someone close to you who's addicted, one needs to do the same drug?