I really like the way this story flowed. the dialogue could use some work, but it feels like a genuine story. Is this an exaggerated retelling of a real story?
Reviews for "The Real World"
Sanbles responds:
Nope. But I like that it felt that way to you :P
i injoy this but who the voice acters? id like to know
Sanbles responds:
Cool cool, they're just my friends. You can see their names at the end of the video. They're not, like, professional voice actors or anything haha. At least not yet :o
Something I just really wasn't ready for. Great job man.
Sanbles responds:
Yaaay, thanks for making me feel good about myself!
The art and animation weren't the best thing about this video, but the overall tone and writing was really superb.
The voices could have been better, but they were alright.
Got here totally by chance when this fell inside my recommendations.
The graphic presentation and the animations aren't that good, but not that bad either. A good amount of work was put into that, but it could be a lot more better. Nothing remarkable to say about the music, but I suppose they fit well with the overall tone of the animation.
It's strongest point, though, is the screenwriting and character's personality. I love how the flow of events is really smooth and natural, the people and the hardships they go through are really realistic and feel "human", also thanks to the voice-acting, which never seemed awkward or goofy to me, always keeping it authentic.
I'm giving it a 7, although with better graphics and animations could potentially become a 8.5/10, not higher, mainly because of the simple premise of the story. The goofy way Chase is coping with his hardships gave me quite a chuckle, the characters are likable and the overall piece of work has a strange charm to it and left me some thinking material, unexpectedly leaving me something.
Keep up the good work!
Sanbles responds:
Woah, this was really helpful! Thanks for the thought-out response :D